This is a brief excerpt from my novel in progress, Death and the Maiden:
We held each other
quietly for a few minutes. With my fingertips I felt the soft skin of her neck,
then gravity—or a force even stronger—lowered my hand to the top button of her
blouse. Against my face, her breath felt like an elixir that might forever entwine
us inside Alladin’s Lamp.
Before I realized how
mawkish that sounded, my cell phone rang. Beethoven’s four V for Victory notes
meant it was Willis Chubb. The ringing stopped and started again, Willis’s
signal that it was urgent. Hope’s left breast felt like a hot plate. We looked
at each other, Hope’s eyes showing a mixture of lust and resignation. She
nodded toward my phone.
I reluctantly answered
it. “Hey, Willis.”
“Am I interrupting
something?”
“Yes. What’s so
important?”
“How’s Hope? I heard.”
“Just fine. You’re on
days. How’d you know?”
“Eyes and ears,
twenty-four-seven, you know me. It took the city’s finest a half hour to find
the perp at Saints ER. The douchebag’s name is Chuck Roswell. He showed up with
one of your friend’s fancy fingernails stuck in his eyeball, he’ll probably
trade it in for a glass one.”
5 comments:
Bob, that started hot and heavy and ended with a laugh.
I agree with Diane! Keep those sparks and jabs coming!
Julie
A very intriguing snippet. I'm inclined to say I'm left hanging, but I think those words would more appropriately be said by the narrator.
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Seriously - I agree with Diane! :) Great snippet.
What a great excerpt! Very steamy at the beginning, and I had to laugh at the end.
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